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Deb
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Have ever met this girl named Deb
She hides in your closet and under the bed
She follows you everywhere even your mind
Somehow someway she is surely kind
She laughs in your ear
"Cut" she whispers near
No I say, I want her gone
"Yes" she says for far too long
I get the blade, put it on top of my arm
"Do it" she says with quite a charm
Over and over the blood starts to pour
"Worthless" she says again, I want more
She clouds my head with thoughts of death
"Fine" I say under my breath
Deb whispers something one last time
"Do it, nobody cares, you should die" with such grime
Deb claimed another victim, you see it was me
Depression won and denied my plea
Life offered more but I had to decline
My friend Deb said death with quite a chime
She hides in your closet and under the bed
She follows you everywhere even your mind
Somehow someway she is surely kind
She laughs in your ear
"Cut" she whispers near
No I say, I want her gone
"Yes" she says for far too long
I get the blade, put it on top of my arm
"Do it" she says with quite a charm
Over and over the blood starts to pour
"Worthless" she says again, I want more
She clouds my head with thoughts of death
"Fine" I say under my breath
Deb whispers something one last time
"Do it, nobody cares, you should die" with such grime
Deb claimed another victim, you see it was me
Depression won and denied my plea
Life offered more but I had to decline
My friend Deb said death with quite a chime
I tried once again for long poetry, I actually like this one. Comments/suggestions below, thanks
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Now that I know who Deb is, you did an excellent job with this poem. I like how it rhymes, but doesn't flow like a typical rhyming poem does. Very creative and truthful, which I like the most~